for literacy i have done a character web were we describe the character and paint a pitcher in someones head about the character. i found it hard to describe my character.
Hello Heavenly how are you ? I like the way you told us where the story was set and you said that with a lot of detail whoa! But when you described how the character felt it was plain no description. That´s my feed forward more detail. Raidon
ReplyDeleteHello Heavenly how are you ? I like the way you told us where the story was set and you said that with a lot of detail whoa! But when you described how the character felt it was plain no description. That´s my feed forward more detail.
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thank you for the feed back
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